BautistaK VisualPoem from Kapaa Middle School MEDIA on Vimeo.
My Visual Poem is about my surroundings or nature. I picked nature because its very important to us, without it how are we suppose to live. Also, I wanted people to really look at what we have and tell them that nature is the only thing that we need. This is how we built up all the things we have today. I wanted to show that I love nature and share my surroundings with all of you. The Visual makes an impact by showing what we have, all the important things that we need.
I didn't really add any effects expect for the transitions. It don't think that it changed any color, mood, and lighting to it. If you see any change then I'm probably blind. Although, the transition and my titles does effect my video because it has this good camouflage and the transition is smooth. I like that does transition existed.We never critiqued ours yet so there are no results. All i'm hoping for is a 4, and yes that's a high score that I want, but it's not bad to dream right. Next week we will critique our poems and we will critique it on our own blogs. I'm just hoping for the best.
I like your topic
ReplyDeleteYour adiuo got cut off
I liked you shots
I love all of your interesting shots.
ReplyDeleteThere was a spelling error at the end.
Your transitions were really cool!
I like the unique shots
ReplyDeleteWatch your lighting, in some shots it looked really bright
The ending was very cool with the transitions against the star background
I like how clear the audio is.
ReplyDeleteThe movement makes it hard to take in your shots.
I like the transitions you use.
I like all your effects
ReplyDeleteYou could fix your voice overs
I like all your b-roll
I like the unusual angles.
ReplyDeleteSome of the word were spelled wrong.
I love the rhyming.
I liked the color and level of appeal of B-Roll!
ReplyDeleteOne thing that I would improve is maybe add in pad when filming.
I loved the clear and articulate voice overs!
I like all of the effects you used
ReplyDeleteWatch your spelling
Nice shots of B-roll
I liked your topic
ReplyDeleteI think you could have spoken a little louder
Great transitions
nice B-roll
ReplyDeleteLittle more video next time
Great transitions
Great Transitions and Poem!
ReplyDeleteThere were some spelling errors, and the audio needed a pad at the end.
Great B-roll!
I really like your panning shots, especially your opening, it was done really nicely.
ReplyDeleteYou had a lot of grammatical and spelling errors however, which was kind of distracting.
Your poem itself was done beautifully, and the visuals went well with it.
I like your poem
ReplyDeleteYou can fix your writing mistakes
I like your transitions
Good transitions
ReplyDeleteSome spelling errors
nice b-roll
Compliment: I enjoyed the shots you achieved. I also liked your transition of the flower.
ReplyDeleteConstructive: Your voice overs got cut off at the end.
Compliment: Nice shots and topic
I loved your pictures and videos of nature.
ReplyDeleteYou spelled things wrong and you cut a little bit of your audio.
Overall I loved your video.
I really like your story .
ReplyDeleteYou can fix your sound just to be a little bit louder .
I really like your picture and videos in your visual poem.
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